The phrase “I don’t really care” here is problematic. I could see an interpretation of the line where you’re attempting to be open and accepting of others’ experiences. But that reading becomes difficult when you immediately follow it with some verbiage describing your readers. Which can easily come across as condescending? Following that Official Love Daisy One Another American Flag Hippie Lover Vintage 1967 Shirt. Even though you have already cast dispersions at their opinions, experiences. And even gender is just not a great way to get people to come to your writing with open minds. There are quite a few other examples of exclusionary language in the piece. Which will lead your readership towards seeing you as angry and combative?
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There are the bones of a good persuasive piece here, but it gets clouded in your choice of tone and syntax. Might I suggest the USU Writing Center for some quick guidance in an Official Love Daisy One Another American Flag Hippie Lover Vintage 1967 Shirt? It’s free to all students, and you’ll get some really great feedback on how to clearly make your points without muddying it with phrasing that will estrange your readers. Shall I write a review of my experience with you saying how you’re standoffish, mean, unwilling to listen to everyone ever, not as smart as you think you are, and overall not worth anyone’s time to interact with? What if I prefaced that review by saying it’s “how it is” and I don’t care if anyone else has had different experiences with you?
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